It seems to me..
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Kaiser Mors III
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It seems to me..
...That this is kinda become the Poetry capital of the nation, so.. out of randomness and bored, I think I'll post some older poems of mine...Quote:night. by Tonerman on Jan 15, 2002 (edit) (bookmark) (print) (next)Author's Last Login: 6 minutes agoIn Category: Angst, Personal.Night comes.Always does.I get bored.I get sadened.I get depressed.I get suicidal.But it's night.I should sleep.Shouldn't I?I don't.Insomnia.How many,Hour tonight?Six hours?Five hours?Four hours?Three hours.I never dream.I have no dreams.I need no dreams.I forgot last night.I forgot last week.Memory fades.Best that way.I don't want it.No need to recall.Burn the memories.Like photos in a fire.BURN THEM ALLL!For at night.They come to me.Seering my mind.Like a sodering iron.Burning my mind.Kill the night!Before,It kills me. Quote:As you see me, by Tonerman on Jan 15, 2002 (edit) (bookmark) (print) (next)Author's Last Login: 7 minutes agoIn Category: Angst, Personal. 0 total.As you see me,I am what you see.Right?Exactly what you see?Right.As you see me,I am,Stupid.I don't get the grades you do.I am,Weak.I can't lift the weight you can.I am,Benieith you.I don't play the sports you do.I am,A coward.I won't fight like you do.I am,Annoying.I don't act like you do.I am,A pervert.I'm not afraid of sexuality like you.I am,Immoral.I don't have the religious beliefs you do.I am,Arragant.I correct you when you are wrong.I am,Closed minded.I won't hold the oppinions you do.I am,Unpopular.I don't care about popularity like you do.I am,Not you!I will never be you.I will never not be me.I will never give into you.As you see me....I am less then you.I am less then you,Yes.I am,Less.Less of what you are.More of what I am.You hate me,Fear me.Deride me.Distrust me.Dislike me.That's ok,The feeling,Is mutual...But one thing,I don't fear you!For as I see you,You are less then,what you are... Quote:Leave me alone by Tonerman on Jan 28, 2002 (edit) (bookmark) (print) (next)Author's Last Login: 10 minutes agoIn Category: Angst, Personal. 1 views this week. 1 total.Leave me alone,I don't want,Your sympathy.Your cruelty.I don't need,Your words.Your belittlement.Leave me be!Go away from me.Far away from me.Leave me to myself.I don't need your help.I don't want your help...All I want is simple frienship.I don't need your worry.I don't need your anger.I don't need your consern.I don't need your help.Or maybe,I just don't need you,At all? Quote:        Mousy... by Tonerman on Jul 29, 2002 (edit) (bookmark) (print) (next)Author's Last Login: 2 minutes agoIn Category: Humor. 1 views this week. 1 total.It is quite mad,You know?Jumping all,Over.Doing not,What it should.Why is it being,strange?Listin' to,The Great Debate.From the,Theater of dreams.My mouse doesn't mind it.Interupting, it does not care.But, the screen it does dislike.Jumping from left to right.Up from down to leftup.Staying in a corner.Noving things about.About to get me,Angered.Maybe I should just get a new one.Replace my Poor Mousy.But how can I replace my mousy?...How?EASY!Get an optical mouse and the drivers,And show Microsloth who's boss! My work here is done..hehehe Mortis BrookshireKaiser of Shireroth
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Philip Locke
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Re: It seems to me..
These seem less like poetry and more like black metal lyrics to me (and some decent ones at that). The repition of certain lines and the short bursts of anger definitely make me feel as though some long haired metalhead should be screaming these out. Locke.
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Zirandorthel
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Re: It seems to me..
I like "As you see me" a lot. It's very clever. Sun Bless, Earth KeepZirandorthel I of TreesiaThe Golden DarknessNiirus TinenetuwarLet the fates burn!
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Kaiser Mors III
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Re: It seems to me..
Lyrics are a form of Poetry.... often. but these are poems.. that's just my style... I got more... some darker.. some lighter... all related to my life.. Fun. aye? Accually.. all my poems are from some point in my life when I was venting my mind.. though some are just me having fun... MOUSY!... And some, that won't show up here.. blow hard.. Mortis BrookshireKaiser of Shireroth
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Gryphon Avocatio
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Re: It seems to me..
I like as you see me...it's cool! I know the feeling well... -Gryphon Avocatio- Lord Governor and Duke of all Yardistan - Minister of Research and Education, Shireroth - Shirerothian Elder - SAVE THE KIWI!! - Lover of Llamas Give me your child, and by the age of five, I can make him a priest or a thief or a scholar.
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Kaiser Mors III
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Re: It seems to me..
Should I post more? Mortis BrookshireKaiser of Shireroth
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