By the will of the Duke of Elwynn, the following Decree shall be implemented forthwith:
In light of me no longer having a life due to the IB. And me being a vengeful son of a black sheep. AND in light of the IB deploying examiners in Elwynn. I hereby place a bounty on each IB examiner's head that is offered to me served cold with my long deserved 7s.
So it is written so it shall be.
By the hand of,
Ducal Decree LXII : Abhorances of Nature
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Ducal Decree LXII : Abhorances of Nature
Leo Fenrir
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Percy Rutherford
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Re: Ducal Decree LXIII : Abhorances of Nature
Criterion A: Knowledge and Understanding of Works [1/5]
The candidate has shown an appalling lack of understanding of the International Baccalaureate and its methods and merits. Candidates should generally make an attempt to comprehend their subject matter before writing about it.
Criterion B: Treatment of Works / Effective Use of Literary Devices [1/5]
The candidate's treatment of the works is superficial at best, and the candidate has failed totally to even understand the use of literary devices. A level of 1 is generous.
Criterion C: Presentation [2/5]
While the candidate has maintained the general shape of a Ducal Decree, the length required to make any sort of Decree effective is noticeably lacking, and therefore, a level of two is awarded.
Criterion D: Formal Use of Language [1/5]
The level of the candidate's language here is absolutely shocking. Even if we were to overlook the four consecutive sentence fragments and the inappropriate register of language, the sheer quality of the language deserves a level 1.
General Comments:
All in all, a deplorable decree. The candidate is advised to augment his work to a much higher level of quality before resubmitting.
TOTAL [5/20]
IB LEVEL 2+
The candidate has shown an appalling lack of understanding of the International Baccalaureate and its methods and merits. Candidates should generally make an attempt to comprehend their subject matter before writing about it.
Criterion B: Treatment of Works / Effective Use of Literary Devices [1/5]
The candidate's treatment of the works is superficial at best, and the candidate has failed totally to even understand the use of literary devices. A level of 1 is generous.
Criterion C: Presentation [2/5]
While the candidate has maintained the general shape of a Ducal Decree, the length required to make any sort of Decree effective is noticeably lacking, and therefore, a level of two is awarded.
Criterion D: Formal Use of Language [1/5]
The level of the candidate's language here is absolutely shocking. Even if we were to overlook the four consecutive sentence fragments and the inappropriate register of language, the sheer quality of the language deserves a level 1.
General Comments:
All in all, a deplorable decree. The candidate is advised to augment his work to a much higher level of quality before resubmitting.
TOTAL [5/20]
IB LEVEL 2+
Percy Rutherford
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Re: Ducal Decree LXIII : Abhorances of Nature
Every time you guys talk about IB you remind me of how I went to the only lukio in town that provided an IB option, and how I didn't take it. I'm starting to think it was probably a good idea 
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