Shireroth

Posted: **Thu Jun 18, 2009 10:15 am**

As the Ocean flows us by, Benacia she shall rise!
Followed by the deepest love for the land
Where the God's set their eyes, Benacia she shall rise!
In the sea of harmony.

Perfect in every way, we shall stand up and say
Benacia, my home I make of thee
Where the homeless are the kings, and the loved ones sing
Benacia, my home I make of thee

The birds and trees, the mountains and the bees sing praises! (sing praises!)
Rivers of deepest blue, forests so green for you,
Benacia, I'm in love with you
Benacia, I'm in love with you!

Perfect in ever way, we shall stand up and say
Benacia, my home I make of thee
Where the homeless are the kings, and the loved ones sing
Benacia, my home I make of thee!!!!
Benacia, my home I make of thee!!!!!

Just a rough draft, so tell me what you think I should change or add!

Posted: **Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:04 am**

Well what does everyone think? Any suggestions and constructive criticism is welcome.

Posted: **Tue Jun 23, 2009 3:07 pm**

I think it's well written, honestly. Except for this part:

The birds and trees, the mountains and the bees sing praises! (sing praises!)

Ever heard of 'the Birds and the Bees' talk? It'll have some of the more immature of your american audience giggling alittle. I know I did.

Posted: **Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:00 am**

When I was writing it I noticed that, but decided to keep it for laughs.

Posted: **Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:25 pm**

It's very good.

Posted: **Thu Jun 25, 2009 6:59 am**

Thanks!

Shireroth

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